Tigers walking across the sky moaning and groaning. Clouds shaped like stars in the sky. Dancing across the clouds seeing how many shapes there are.
By Shaana
Blue sky like a stream floating in the sky and big monsters. A Motorbike rider is riding here like a streak of speed.
By William
Tyre marks on the sky like at the beach. Clouds like marshmallows in the sky, like a trampoline jumping from cloud to cloud.
By Caleb
Clouds like white icecreams in the sky and monster trucks rolling through the sky. Vanilla icecream clouds making shapes and imaginary pictures in my head.
By Tim
Cold crystals is ice chickenpox on the grass.
Little frost eggs on the grass
Vanilla chocolate sprinkled on the grass,
Rain sprinkles on the grass, the rain is broken.
By Adam
Jack Frost goes over the town and covers it in white because he does not like the colour green.
The sandpits frozen, the playgrounds covered in ice.
It is freezing ice.
By Casey
Dew sparkling on the grass even smaller than tiny ants.
Birds singing like a choir.
Those dew drop ants are like little diamonds like earrings that fell out of the sky.
By Sophie
Jack Frost covers our grass with white snow.
Jack Frost covers up bark chips.
Adam made a mountain of snow and it was cold!
It felt like a popsicle!
By Connor
Little diamonds shining in the sun.
Grass blades sparkling with dew drops.
Wind blowing my hair side to side.
Little diamonds shining everywhere.
Dew shines like glitter.
By Tyler
great writing all you budding little authors.
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Thanks so much Bruce! You are our first audience feedback! The students are doing so well! Their hard work is producing stunning writing, and they LOVE the feeling of being a real AUTHOR!
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